Monday, April 16, 2012

4-16 Monday Night Homework!

Sorry for the wait!

Mini paragraph- How did the USA change the war for the Allies Powers?
(think about the movie and new technologies)

Use transition words and 3 details!

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8 comments:

NafeeseD said...

I Think The US Changed The War For The Allies Powers Because They Invented New Machinery And Had Alot Of Money Put In For Their Military. For Instance, The USA Created The Jeep , A Truck Built For War , It Carries 7 Soldiers And It Only Weighs About 3000 Pounds . Additionally, The US Spent About 300 Billions Dollars On This Military . Furthermore, The US Had The Biggest Effect For The Allied Powers. Clearly, The USA Changed The War For The Allied Powers Because They Invented New Machinery And Had A Lot Of Money For Their Military .

Nina Nguyen said...

I think the USA changed the war for the allies powers by inventing and involving new machinery.This machinery was incredibly very power and took many lives. For instance,Jeeps, tanks, guns, bombs, planes and many other lethal weapons were being used. These weapons were to demolish the enemies. Additionally, this killed many lives and left following families terrified and sorrow. Many died, many suffered, but let's not forget many gave us victory. Furthermore, this has actually made us who we are today as american citizens. This war was remembered in many ways. People were remembered for fighting, being involved and helping, or also even standing by for warnings and look out as well. Everyone seemed very supportive. Clearly, this is how the USA changed war for the allies powers, we simply made evil weaker than ever. This is what makes America , well obviously AMERICA. I believe anyone who is an american citizen should be proud of what their country did for them. This war gave us freedom ,

alexander said...

I think, it changed war because it's all apart of self defence.for
instance, had every right to get
back the love and respect we earn.additionally,it get respect you have to give it to earn it.furthermore,that's what war have accomplished once anf for all. clarly as we learn war it's
mostly important to your culture.

Jessie-chan said...

I think the USA changed the war for the Allies Powers in many ways. For instance, after the attack on Pearl Harbor USA declared war on Germany. Addtionally, all the citizens started to help and produce war goods. Companies that made and sold microwaves and etc. also started making war goods. Furthermore, women begin to take over jobs of producing war goods while man goes to war. Clearly,the USA did change the war for the Allies Power.

Naijashea T. said...

I think the USA changed the war for the allies powers by inventing and involving new machinery.For instance, after the attack on Pearl Harbor USA declared war on Germany.all the citizens started to help and produce war goods.

Anonymous said...

I think the U.S.A changed the of the war for tons of reasons.
For instance, the U.S.A. looked like it was unstopable.
Additionally, their war tech has improved alot.
Furthermore, they were looking for revenge because of what happend at pearl harbor.
Clearly, the U.S.A. changed the outcome of this war alot.

mareeda said...

I think the USA changed the war for the allies powers by having more advanced things. For instance our technology is way more advanced then theirs. Furthermore U.S would have a better chance of winning. Clearly U.S was ore ready and prepared with their technology in war!

Miyaa said...

i think that the USA made a big chang in the war for allies powers. for instance after the attack on us we wanted war. additionally , woman started to make things for and our starts started makeing war thinks for use.furtermore USA had more bombs and guns so that would help out . clearly the USA made a change for allie powers.