MINIPARAGRAPH - Describe the attack on Pearl Harbor? Who was responsible and what happened during the attack?
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9 comments:
I think the attack on Pearl Harbor was a little sneeky because they did it early in the morning. for instance, the japenesse played no jokes when it happen nd they killed alot of americans. Additionally, the americans shuold have been prepared for it so no one cluod have died. Furthermore, the japenesse shot everything on the harbor. clearly, both sides are to blame.
The attack to Pearl Harbor was unfortunately very off guard for the United States of America. Japan associating with us just didn't seem to work out quite much. We seemed to have disagreed on many circumstances. For instance, If Japan and the U.S. would have came to a settlement they could both deal with, none of this would happen. So therefore Japan seemed to have think maybe that there was no other option than to attack with full force not only right away but also secretly as well. Secondly, us Americans should have known that Pearl Harbor's attack was coming because of the communication problem. Even though things were any where near violence involved, the U.S. should have known there was not going to be an agreeing outcome.By the time Japan hit, the telegrams of fair warnings were just hitting the U.S. which lead to late notice and unprepossessing. Furthermore, Japan clearly attacked using full force and destroying many things, killing loyal and even some innocent people. Also , not any of this got to the president till the actual fight was already ending? They really need to make some huge improvements, like a emergency plan, back up , awareness watch, always stay on duty, be prepared for whatever. We are The United States, we should not have to take a horrible loss like so in the Pearl Harbor event.
I think that japan was offended by pearl harbors leaders and felt that american wanted war. For instance, japan was either accepting war or peace. Additionally, i believe that japan have to make war in order to achieve their love/respect. Futhermore, i believe that there a misunderstanding between harbor and japan but clearly, japan must pay for their trouble and end it on the spot.
I think Japan was responsible for the attack on Pearl Harbor. For instance, it was on a peaceful Sunday morning when Pearl Harbor was attacked by the Japanese, the US navy was caught off guard. Additionally, many US marine/navy soldiers were killed and wounded. The battle ships and planes were also destroyed. Furthermore, Japan is an axis allies (central allied) with Germany and Russia (Soviet Union) declared war on Germany for taking over Poland.And Russia is allies with the US, so if something's wrong went wrong with Russia, the US will step in. US naval is on an Island right next to Japan, so if US gets involved, then the Japanese will be the closest central power to attack. Clearly, I think Japan is responsible for for the attack on Pearl Harbor but they also did it to protect themselves.
Attack on Pearl Harbor was about when Japan made USA enter world war 1. I think that Japan started something they could not finish. For instance they attacked us when we was not aware that they was coming. Additionally if they would have told us they were trying to start a war with us they would of lost more soldiers. Furthermore USA should now always be aware of their surroundings. Clearly we cannot trust any other countries!!
The attack on Pearl Harbor was off guard for the United state of American. Japan and the United State didn't seem to work very well. We seem to have to many trusted in other stated that we became to regret why this happen. For instance, japan who was our allied attack our military base and civilian by surprise without our concerned or us acknowledging it. Even thought the United State should have know that the Japaneses wouldn't have agreed with us by sending the message through the telegram. Before they knew what was happening it was to late to reacted to it faster then usually, that lead to many people death from a surprising war from Japan.
I think the attack on Pearl Harbor was very sneaky.For instance, the japaneses attcked at around 7:50 in the mornning.Additionally, the Japenese had alreeady been practicing for a long time.Furthermore, the U.S. was not prepared for this attack.Clearly the Japenese were very sneaky.
The attack to Pearl Harbor was unfortunately very off guard .For instance, it was on a peaceful Sunday morning when Pearl Harbor was attacked by the Japanese, the US navy was caught off guard.many US marine/navy soldiers were killed and wounded. Japan clearly attacked using full force and destroying many things, killing loyal and even some innocent people.
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